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Model + Photographer
Tell me what you think! Any comment would be much appreciated..
Tell me what you think! Any comment would be much appreciated..
Image size
3168x4752px 5.42 MB
Make
Canon
Model
Canon EOS 500D
Shutter Speed
1/32 second
Aperture
F/5.0
Focal Length
45 mm
ISO Speed
3200
Date Taken
Jul 1, 2011, 1:31:58 AM
Lens
EF-S18-55mm f/3.5-5.6 IS
Sensor Size
15mm
© 2011 - 2024 solo3991
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Nice shot! Your work is improving! Your framing is very nice; your fill the frame with the subject matter. I like the catch light in both eyes; it gives that little bit of a sparkle that adds to the subject matter. The shadows on the cheekbone work well and does the classical butterfly lighting. You controlled the seams in your background a lot better in this shot.
So what would I do differently? First of all, I would use a larger background. It does not extend to the bottom of the image at the bottom right of the picture; and the little corner of white is distracting. The funny shadow cast by the eyelashes still needs a bit of work. I would probably Photoshop a few of the stray hairs on the forehead that are a bit distracting as well.
The main thing I would do differently though, is to move my camera up a bit and be shooting more at the subject's eye level.
Good work; your technique is improving!